tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-559260659330383107.post1920678417105940486..comments2011-05-31T14:41:44.423+02:00Comments on Writing Year Nine: TIA Brother by Sir John SwärdMr Ishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09134227545197323665noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-559260659330383107.post-70614281856551681242011-01-31T15:06:38.799+01:002011-01-31T15:06:38.799+01:00SOME LANGUAGE POINTS
1. "was a quite comfort...SOME LANGUAGE POINTS<br /><br />1. "was a quite comfortable one" > was quite a ....<br /><br />2. "aircraft who" > that<br /><br />3. "1,5" > 1.5<br /><br />4. "a mystery for me of how" > a mystery for me how..<br /><br />5. "not just only" > not only<br /><br />6. "nothing less but" > nothing less than<br /><br />7. "thing that made .... is" > that made ... was<br /><br />8. "brought me home to their houses" > invited me into their homes<br /><br />9. "You note the mistake" > You notice ...<br /><br />10. "there was no idea" > there was no point<br /><br />11. "got food poisned" > got food poisoningMr Ishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09134227545197323665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-559260659330383107.post-42328846316964708142011-01-17T14:32:14.021+01:002011-01-17T14:32:14.021+01:00That's really good, John. Well done!
A few sm...That's really good, John. Well done!<br /><br />A few small language mistakes, which I'll go through with you later, but you get the feel of the place across really well.Mr Ishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09134227545197323665noreply@blogger.com